英文写作无论在国内考试还是留学考试中都占有很大的比例,但却一直是广大中国学生的弱项,在许多方面,体现出他们缺少语言运用的能力,包括词汇的理解,句式的变化等。这方面能力的培养需要日积月累。
现在,举出一些例子,大家要很好地体会这些句子改进前与改进后的变化,希望对同学们的写作有一点帮助。
1.the artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
改进:artists'work upgrades our civilization.
2.for example,you work in a big factory.
改进:suppose you work in a big factory.
3.you'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
改进:you'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
4.we willown nothing at all if we depend on luck.
改进:we will get nothing if we rely on luck.
5.he will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
改进:he willget a higher salary,thus improving his life.
6.their brain is still very young.
改进:they are still immature.
7.dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
改进: dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
8.they can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
改进:they cannot tell right from wrong.
9.it will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
改进:it will help children learn to make good use of time.
10.though it is not the best job,it afford to his life.
改进:though it is not the best job, he can make ends meet with it.
11.since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they wantfurther development.
改进:since people are never satisfied with their status quo,they want further development.
12.the only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
改进:the only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
13.they like an active life but not a peaceful life.
改进:they like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
14.some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
改进:some cigarettes may cost even more.
15.it is very necessary to have more qualified scientists and technicians.
改进:qualified scientists and technicians are necessary.
16.they cannot think clearly.
改进:they cannot think straight.
17.money can improve their living standard.
改进:money can improve their life.
18.if a person only cares about money,this will lead him to be unhappy all his life.
改进:if a person only cares about money,he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
19.one purpose of education is to study the way in which to study later.
改进:one purpose of education is to learn to learn.
20.many parents arrange their children to go to learn piano.
改进:many parents send their children to piano classes.
21.eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finisheating without doing any washing.
改进:the best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after the meal.
22.smoking can help you relax your mind.
改进:cigarettes can help you relax.
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